Revising a Proposal.
Requirement is very few but need to be detailed across documents.
1. Paragraphs are too long, need to break each paragraph to 2-3 short ones.
2.Literature review section, add sub-headings,make it a clear structure. (This proposal is actually for a finished dissertation,you should use same/similar sub-headings as dissertation.
3.Methodology section, use sub-headings, (we must use, research approach, data collection, method,, research ethics, etc).
4. A few sections are missing, gave a sample to follow, we need same structure and no elements missed.
5. Need to add 7-10 references.
I have attached the prof’s feedback, the proposal to be edited, and samples.E